still getting close babeh
holding onto each other
I love you :)
That is eternal and messemerizing
Holding each other
All to do for this Valentine day
Painting each other with color of love
Pampering with singing fairytale of joys
Eternal starry nights
Never ending luv
Silhouttes of you in my embattled life.
I love you :)
That is eternal and messemerizing
Holding each other
All to do for this Valentine day
Painting each other with color of love
Pampering with singing fairytale of joys
Eternal starry nights
Never ending luv
Silhouttes of you in my embattled life.
This first attempt is dedicated to Prats :) for all obvious reasons.....
21 comments:
y such title for this sweet wite ?? even if u mean to say that its all dreams or memories, its not shit !!!
but it was a good one ! loved it :)
same question tht the person above is asking abt the title! And tht was sweet. :)
Nice attempt.:)
i wanna ask the same question as prats too ...i was reading and was like if this is what SHIT HAPPENS is all about i want it everyday...it was beautiful and mesmerizing :)
great start dude....
the title n content of the acro couldn't be any more different... he he... kinda like anti-climax...
one stage of life i believed love is shit :) Arun.
thanks u sneha
hey Nabila, yeah the title n content go different but then i cudnt assemble anything else than this piece of lines.
if we look at the title then one point of life i cd have said well yeah love, the shit happens :P
but yes the title doesnt go well. the content is good one.
ria, that was the title i cud come with after putting arcos principles on the lines i wrote :)
prats, u didnt notice i owed this to u :(
hello
is it the first attemt
i doubt
wow
nicely pen down
dude .. just coz i told u about it, dsnt make me accept the reason for this wonderful post :) !! and sorry .. i was so confused with the content n title that forgot to acknowledge your kindness :)
thanks !!
ps: i should have told that the content should match the title too for an acro :P remember it next time !
:) :) :)
superb hei ji..par title..confusing hei...wellfirst attempt and dedicated it to acrostic queen wow!
kya baat hei :)
Loved it! its beautiful! But as everyone above has asked, even i wanna know, "why did u choose "shit happens" for such a beautiful piece of writing?"
Nonetheless, bahut khoobsurat hai!
Keep writing!
thanks nicks :). this was a collection out of my previous poems. it added to the title.. quite different to the principles of acors.
thanks mate. keep droppin bi :)
yeah PJ, this one was pushed to me by Prats,so correctly dedicated to her.
swetha :)
pallav, this is collection of best lines from my previous poems :)
prats, wud take care of the title to go with the content next timee :)
first attempt itself was grt.!!! al the best for coming ones
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