Tuesday, May 19, 2009

First Kiss

was in a cramped up space, in a volvo bus from his home town to the work place town, a overnight journey away. It was a sleeper bus, with they packed up in her seat for most of the time. Gave two hoots to the onlookers, but with curtains on, they were safe from prying eyes as a shell. His passions were uncontrollable and she being dressed in a pink white top and a saphagetti blue jeans was uncontrollably sweet and he could hardly resist myself, when it was just supposed to be a just hand in hand times together untill the dawn, but it all happened and then no one resisted or stopped each other.

Pure moments of innocent love, began with a small peck and grew to a full fledged liplock with passions overflowing and the world seeming altogether brightened up in the dark night.

11 comments:

Priya Joyce said...

yeh fiction nahi hei eh reality he :P

hav read it on ur other blog :P

Chandler said...

nah no reality PJ. which blog did u read this on ?

Shanu said...

Wow u write really well..u seem to have a romantic streak in u..wat with all ur posts dealin in romance :)

The Geekie said...

truly romantic piece

but whole journey ..dey kissed ???no 1 resisted or stopped??? :P

btw m loving this 55 fiction blog..u r awesome man :)

cheers

Chandler said...

hey shanu, just that right now the romantic streak running huge n high in me.

thanks for the appreciation.

Chandler said...

hey Geekie, fiction mate. :) thanks much.

Sneha said...

y mai third time padh rehi hun.:)
priya bilkul thik bol rehi hai.:)

Chandler said...

are sneha, PJ to yuhi bolti rehti hai. not to take her seriously. plus this is a fiction. Not true story.

Fiction hai :)

Sneha said...

ok maan liya fiction hai.:)

HAPPY.:)

Chandler said...

hehe.

rightie right sneha ;)

Pretty Me!! said...

short and sweet !! passionately sweet :)