Pain is sometimes good
Though it cuts like a knife
But the fun is always there
The flurry of thoughts
Skewed emotions
Up and down
The hope to be good
Again once more
Coming back to you
Across oceans, landscapes
Carving a life out of odds,
Pitted against the history
And when you triumph,
The joy knows no bounds
It's a elephantine phenomenon
That's when you say
Bring 'em on.
We will see
Trust me such a life
Has its own fun and oomph
A raz-mat-azz of its own…
Live this life and win…
Against all odds and
Then feel the moment!!
Feels like good never before
Though it cuts like a knife!!
14 comments:
Feels like good never before
Though it cuts like a knife!!
hey nice lyns :)
woah! a completely different perspective towards pain.
pretty beautiful sam :)
positive lines of pain.....ohh...its beautiful Sam..!!!
keep penning dear..!!!
Kabhi happiness kabhi pain...
ur posts drive me insane :P :P :P
Can I use the knife to cut something else? Mera knife kho gaya :P
This is the perfect post for me today... :)
Yeah!! Pain does make me feel that I am still alive.. ;)
Wonderful one!
yeh, pain is fun at times..
whn we feel the moments, its so good! :D
keep going
swetha
Beautiful..
Pain is gain sometime.. npalys lot of game....
Superrr..
but supp??
Nikhil
nice ..
short sharp lines make this poem good without frills, the words make an impact.
good writing sam.
“Pain is temporary. It may last a minute, or an hour, or a day, or a year, but eventually it will subside and something else will take its place. "
Reminded me of Bryan Adam's - Cuts like a knife
Everything has good part in it :D :D
loved it :D :D
wen pains end..it brings all joys back...ans u feel as never bfore...agree wth what amrita said~~
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