Friday, June 26, 2009

Being Greedy


"I dont want you to leave me right now. Kiss me please."

"You are getting greedy today".

"Nah, your touch and gentle whispers would soothe me in the pain."

" You aint allowed to talk naughty lying in bed nursing your injuries"

"You lookin beautiful my hottie tonite"

"Tryin to flirt with me. Wont work, wont stop"

"Do i need to. You evoke natural feelings out of me"

He said looking at her with eternal admiration for her presence in his life.

"I am still not yours".

"You dont have to be officially tagged to me. Stay back please"

"You lookin hot in this red t-shirt and the jeans."

she whispered,wantin him to sense her feelings.He filled himself in her arms close to her....mulled over for a few fraction of seconds and said "Not more than you!".

That night...right beneath the moon-lit sky, dazzling with stars and just exchanging sweet nothings and pamperings she helped him get over the double agony of the double dressings of the cyst he had in his back operated.

16 comments:

Pallav said...

oops
hey u nicely pen down...

Pallav

Swetha Padakandla said...

so very nice and greedy! :D

enchantinganki said...

Ahem..yeah greedy it is... :-)
btw, hav a look at the new post in my blog..i think u will like it..

Priya Joyce said...

hehehe..tat was sensual

:P

kahin sach toh nahi :P ??

Arun Kumar said...

he he... sweet story...
Dressings of cyst in the back...???
taken outta real life..??? :-)

Arun Kumar said...

anyways... hows this 55 fiction??
I think u've the idea wrong....

Anonymous said...

no wonder you are healing so well ;) right ??

Sneha Shrivastava said...

:) current post ka comment disable hai kya??

Anonymous said...

y a oops pallav ?

Anonymous said...

swetha :)

Anonymous said...

wud check out ur post anki

Anonymous said...

ur guess Pri :)

Anonymous said...

Arun, thodi haqeeqat thoda fasana

Anonymous said...

sneha, galti se disable ho gaya tha

Anonymous said...

hey Prats, the thing is quite different. not healing well. stiches are back :)

The Geekie said...

nicely written